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Promotional mailers – Is there no copy editing at all?

 

Received a mailer from one of the ecommerce websites this morning… offering sale on various items…

Some of the products indeed caught my fancy…(not because I need those products, but because their price increased after the sale.)

Take a look:

Question: Is there no copy editing at all at this ecommerce player?

PS: No prizes for guessing the name of the site

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3rd September!

Alok’s note:

Yes, there is a / sorry was a prize for guessing the site!

I offered a free Rodinhood T-Shirt for the first person to sent me the site name, and Dhaval Parikh send me the mail (in 5 minutes) and WON!

yeah!!

This is the newsletter:

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